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Your SPIRIT is broken,
the punishment
is served in full.
The welts are faded
and pain still lingers
as it should.
The lone receiver
of empty compliments
taken in
and bought in full.
The lesson's hammered
the message has been
reinforced.

You said there would not be
any reason
to fear this world.
But you're the reason
you're the reason
I feel
broken,
and branded,
and burning with doubt.

The welts are faded
and the pain still lingers
as it should.

These things are dealt in increments.
Constant, and laced with detriment.
How dare you ever feign surprise.
When all those fingers point inside.
They're piercing you.

You said there would not be
any reason
to fear this world.
But you're the reason
you're the reason
I feel
broken,
and branded,
and burning with doubt.

These things are dealt in increments.
©2005-2009 ~ArchAngel3989
:iconarchangel3989:

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song, lots of screaming

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Wow that is so beautiful, I love it!! I can't really critique it cause I love the whole thing! The repition of phrases works beautifully, I've never quite managed the art of repition properly lol. But you really did a wonderful job on this piece, definite fav :D :D Well done mate, keep it up :D xx

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i agree beautiful good message and perfect repition and everything

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intelligence in humans is merely a compensation for the loss of instinct and habit

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